I’m about to plunge into an intense work phase to bring my project to a conclusion. Which is a bit of a jolt, having taken the scenic route for a brief and heady period, to explore the exciting practice of writing poetry as a discipline rather than a purely creative splurge. I’m learning the importance of returning to the words and sharing first drafts with others.
Poetry it seems happens in one’s own mind, on paper and in conversation. How fun is that!
This is a poem which has been hanging out to dry for about ten days. A bit like my first clothes wash at college which shrank in the tumble dryer! The dryer in this case being exposure to critical eyes and new thought. It is now a tighter fit and beginning to take shape.
It is about my relationship to reading (as an autistic, dyslexic) and the fascination I have with a certain kind of vintage children’s literature.
I
That book is rubbish.
Don’t buy it, she says.
I frown inwardly
while smiling
a tightrope
smile.
But you are calling
me.
to
a
place
I
once
knew
I, plunged into
papery fragments
all sensation
on a landing
or crumpled pillow
pages crisp
between my fingers.
I, held in the author’s
hand
the slow child
who could not
spell.
© Sonia Boué 2016
Beautiful and full of texture.
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Thank you Rhi! xx
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The text before the poem reads as poetry to me. So beautifully written. Thank you for sharing. Tracey X
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Thank you Tracey! 🙂 xx
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Oh, this is really lovely. Nice tension… and then the visual release at the end. Very satisfying!
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Thank you! Good news that it comes across that way. x
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Yes! I love the beginning, then the tension throughout, and then it feels like it opens up into a wide space – like walking down a narrow path, stepping through a gate, into a wide field. That was my sensory experience 🙂
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I’m very glad! Fascinating response – thank you 🙂
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Wow! So much, in so few words! I really felt a tangible sensory ‘release’ at the end, after the tautness throughout. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much – I’m delighted it was a good sensory experience! 🙂 xx
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Loved it. Especially “tightrope smile”!
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Thank you Andrew! 🙂 x
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